martes, 4 de agosto de 2015

America football cup

Three weeks ago, we lived the most greatest event of this year according for the most of chileans. We not won just a championship ,we do not won just a game, we won a joy and a hope. Why I'm telling you this? Well, that's because I think that football it is not just a game, or a business. Football give us a moment to forget our problems , a moment in our day to day in which we can be happy, forgetting the bills, the work, and the misery that we have in our hopeless country. Because in each football player we see ourselves , and our dream to get out of the marginality.
Football gives to our people a reason to get up in the mornings, buy some beers and comment the game with their friends. Also, is the main reason to go out with their childrens, and see the braveness, and the passion converted into  a football ball. That's why i was one of the thousand chileans that came out to the street , and screamed with the entire family , that Chile won a battle ; Because we still have battles to win. We have to win health ,education and dignity ,against  the people  that thinks that can take everything that belongs us and give it to just a few . We have to fight with the same passion that we celebrate this triumph , because football is it not just a game, is a passion; A passion for the game and for our people. That day will go down in posterity, but our desire of fight for a fair country has to continue. For all this and more , I say : Thanks you guys, for giving us a hope!

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2 comentarios:

  1. I can't deny the joy that triumph gave to the Chilean population, but i'm so pissed off about the political manipulation, they cover the sun with a finger.
    By the way, i'm happy that you enjoyed the cup (: see you!

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  2. Gabriela,

    WC:301. Very Good. Your writing has clear ideas, but you need to edit it in a better way. please pay attention to:

    Three weeks ago, we lived the (most greatest) GREATEST event of this year according (for the) TO most (of)( c) Chileans.

    We not ONLY won (just) a championship ,we (do) DID not ( won) WIN just a game…

    ... we won (a) joy and (a) hope. Why( I'm) AM I telling you this?

    …Football giveS us a moment to forget .…

    a moment in our day to day LIFE in which we can be happy,

    …Also,IT is the main reason to go out with their children(s)

    …( i ) Iwas one of the thousand © Chileans that came out to the street ,

    …against the people that think(s) that THEY can take everything that belongs TO us and give it to just a few .

    … IT is a passion;

    …but our desire ( of) TO fight for a fair country

    Cheers,

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